Newest update. I have to work on scene 13 a bit before I can render it. Also, finish a few in betweens in flash and attempt to color it. The music is really off at the moment because of so much time change in the last couple days..
:41 - guys right hand on table looks too stiff, maybe have him grip the corner of the table
:50 - I still think this needs a touch of work, more in the breakdown pose you have with his arms outstretched before he brings them up to his cheek. The outstretched breakdown may be a bit too much for the context of the shot.
:51 - when duck falls, overlap his neck / head a bit more.
:52 - guy hits the drawer, and then scene freezes, is this your intent?
cupboard door knobs should probably be a different color than the brilliant you are currently using..
Janine
ReplyDelete:41 - guys right hand on table looks too stiff, maybe have him grip the corner of the table
:50 - I still think this needs a touch of work, more in the breakdown pose you have with his arms outstretched before he brings them up to his cheek. The outstretched breakdown may be a bit too much for the context of the shot.
:51 - when duck falls, overlap his neck / head a bit more.
:52 - guy hits the drawer, and then scene freezes, is this your intent?
cupboard door knobs should probably be a different color than the brilliant you are currently using..